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fledgist ([personal profile] fledgist) wrote2007-10-13 02:57 pm
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reading student essays

 
too many words piled thick and very dense
with little order hardly any fact
and ignorance remains wholly intact

of conviction there is no real pretense
no understanding of what they have lacked
too many words piled thick and very dense

thought must require an effort too intense
and so they substitute with trivial fact
and passages plagiarised intact
too many words piled thick and very dense